It should say “if you’re lucky enough to be in Alaska or Hawaii, you’ll be able to see it.” Otherwise, you should note that there’s a map for eclipse viewing here: http://www.timeanddate.com/gfx/eclipses/20121128/path720.png

Bright red=you can view it for the entire duration.
Shaded to the left=you can view it until sunrise
Shaded to the right=you can view the eclipse AFTER sunset.

Seeing as how it won’t be sunset in any of the red-shaded areas of the states at the time of the eclipse, unfortunately, citizens won’t be able to see it much at all. You really should point that out in this article.

Just to let you know, if you ARE actually in Hawaii or Alaska, it starts at 2am Hawaii Time with the peak eclipse at 4:34am Hawaii Time or UTC-10.

“at its peek”

“peek”

That ought to be spelled “peak”. My innate grammar/spelling Nazi mode had to point that out. It’s also worth pointing out that the Moon’s a moon, not a planet as implied by the statement about the “planets” moving.

Correct those and you’ve got a cool article. Too bad it’s raining/snowing where I live, so I can’t see it.